Side-FX + Lyrical Game
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if anyone can get the **** to work on kazaa feel free to uplaod it onto ur computer and do it! I tried, but im not sure if it worked. I have Kazaa K++ so everyone can try and download it and tell me if it works
"and now I'm out, and on the hunt to infect lives with creativity and earn respect"
Damn man, i love your lyrics, amazing, a couple of comments.
Is it just me or in track 2 - reflections, there is a buzz in the track, i thought it was just something shacking in my car from the bass, but i hear it also at home.
Another comment, dont take this the wrong way, its just my opinion.
Your lyrics are deep, very intellectual. But i think that you are putting too much imphasis in your lyrics on the facts that rap in general is garbege and that you wanna change the face of rap by good lyrics. you also talk about how you lyrics actually have meaning. but non of your songs actually talk about a topic that u think is important.
You say "i am thinking of problems with no feasiable solution. reducing problems is what we need" this is very good, but you dont have any songs that talk about how to reduce these problem, most of your lyrics are about how your lyrics will solve these problems and that they r deep and not about shacking asses. but i didnt hear anything about how to solve problems, example, say u write a song about how corporations are evil and stuff, and share your views on this topic in the song. then the song that follows should talk about how you actually rap about stuff that matters. that way the second song will have some material to reflect on.
you say " i cant express the intellectualnes above the rest," i am assuming you mean that u feel more intelectual over other rappers who rap about garbege, but till now you have only rapped about how "good" u are and how u have "good" lyrics, without rapping about something that really sinks in peoples mind.
Landin, please dont take this the wrong way, i am not hating, i have alot of respect for you, you have unlimited potiential, i am just giving my opion on how to improve your song. but then again who am i to say.
Damn man, i love your lyrics, amazing, a couple of comments.
Is it just me or in track 2 - reflections, there is a buzz in the track, i thought it was just something shacking in my car from the bass, but i hear it also at home.
Another comment, dont take this the wrong way, its just my opinion.
Your lyrics are deep, very intellectual. But i think that you are putting too much imphasis in your lyrics on the facts that rap in general is garbege and that you wanna change the face of rap by good lyrics. you also talk about how you lyrics actually have meaning. but non of your songs actually talk about a topic that u think is important.
You say "i am thinking of problems with no feasiable solution. reducing problems is what we need" this is very good, but you dont have any songs that talk about how to reduce these problem, most of your lyrics are about how your lyrics will solve these problems and that they r deep and not about shacking asses. but i didnt hear anything about how to solve problems, example, say u write a song about how corporations are evil and stuff, and share your views on this topic in the song. then the song that follows should talk about how you actually rap about stuff that matters. that way the second song will have some material to reflect on.
you say " i cant express the intellectualnes above the rest," i am assuming you mean that u feel more intelectual over other rappers who rap about garbege, but till now you have only rapped about how "good" u are and how u have "good" lyrics, without rapping about something that really sinks in peoples mind.
Landin, please dont take this the wrong way, i am not hating, i have alot of respect for you, you have unlimited potiential, i am just giving my opion on how to improve your song. but then again who am i to say.
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Rep Power: 319 ^yah i understand what you mean...but the thing i have come to accept is the fact that things wont change. These problems we have are rooted deep into our history, and i dont think a song by my can change that. I just like the think that maybe someone can listen and realise. Im not gunna try to be a hero and state all the things we should do better in order to make the world a better place. Ive accepted the fact that it sucks, and the way I can cope is by writing lyrics. In my past songs i talked about topics and ****, but i didnt really like them...il send you one if u like, but it was when i wasnt as good. Also recently ive been interested in my own opportunities, and how i want to make it, but dont think i will, just because not many people are like you!
I do feel as though i have good lyrics, and compared to most of the radio music nowadays i think its obvious that not much emphasis is put on the lyrics in those songs. And if you listen to the next line right after that one it is
"That i feel above the rest, sadness is all thats left
when i try to speak it
I fail to prove my goddamm worth, everytime i try to reach it"
sadness in the way that it will most likely not get heard, and in the way that even if it did the situation is still hopeless.
I feel that there is so much wrong with this world that these is nothing we can do about it...these problems will only cease once we are all gone, and nature can go back to its balanced state! Once again im not a missionary on a misson to save the world...i just like to say things that most people dont think about...get them to think about it, and maybe change the views of someone. But the reality is that it wont happen.
And abe dont worry man! i love talking about stuff like this, because it really makes you think, but u have to remember that when i write a song i do it based on inspiration. I rarely write lyrics unless i get truly inspired by something, and recently it has been the heplessness of my quest for success.
I do feel as though i have good lyrics, and compared to most of the radio music nowadays i think its obvious that not much emphasis is put on the lyrics in those songs. And if you listen to the next line right after that one it is
"That i feel above the rest, sadness is all thats left
when i try to speak it
I fail to prove my goddamm worth, everytime i try to reach it"
sadness in the way that it will most likely not get heard, and in the way that even if it did the situation is still hopeless.
I feel that there is so much wrong with this world that these is nothing we can do about it...these problems will only cease once we are all gone, and nature can go back to its balanced state! Once again im not a missionary on a misson to save the world...i just like to say things that most people dont think about...get them to think about it, and maybe change the views of someone. But the reality is that it wont happen.
And abe dont worry man! i love talking about stuff like this, because it really makes you think, but u have to remember that when i write a song i do it based on inspiration. I rarely write lyrics unless i get truly inspired by something, and recently it has been the heplessness of my quest for success.
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Rep Power: 319 wait one more important thing....the sonng reflections is on a topic....the industry, and how repeated ideas have been used to sell records. Ill give u some quotes
"talent one word i hear different meanings"
"i dont understand how the pleasure can be derived from the same"
"except minute changes to trick its like im on a plane doin backflips cuz its making me sick." ---> minute changes in the music using the same idea
"shake it lower like salt mama tipsy, repetition of ideas still considered nifty? IM strictly using examples to provide, you with an opportunity to derive, you're own taste..."
And abe one thing u should think about. Whens the last time u sat down for 4 hours to write lyrics about how the world sucks. It gets EXTREMELY depressing after a while, so i needed a change.
"talent one word i hear different meanings"
"i dont understand how the pleasure can be derived from the same"
"except minute changes to trick its like im on a plane doin backflips cuz its making me sick." ---> minute changes in the music using the same idea
"shake it lower like salt mama tipsy, repetition of ideas still considered nifty? IM strictly using examples to provide, you with an opportunity to derive, you're own taste..."
And abe one thing u should think about. Whens the last time u sat down for 4 hours to write lyrics about how the world sucks. It gets EXTREMELY depressing after a while, so i needed a change.
Last edited by Big Baller L; Sep 21, 2004 at 10:31 PM.
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Originally Posted by Big Baller L
wait one more important thing....the sonng reflections is on a topic....the industry, and how repeated ideas have been used to sell records. Ill give u some quotes
"talent one word i hear different meanings"
"i dont understand how the pleasure can be derived from the same"
"except minute changes to trick its like im on a plane doin backflips cuz its making me sick." ---> minute changes in the music using the same idea
"shake it lower like salt mama tipsy, repetition of ideas still considered nifty? IM strictly using examples to provide, you with an opportunity to derive, you're own taste..."
And abe one thing u should think about. Whens the last time u sat down for 4 hours to write lyrics about how the world sucks. It gets EXTREMELY depressing after a while, so i needed a change.
"talent one word i hear different meanings"
"i dont understand how the pleasure can be derived from the same"
"except minute changes to trick its like im on a plane doin backflips cuz its making me sick." ---> minute changes in the music using the same idea
"shake it lower like salt mama tipsy, repetition of ideas still considered nifty? IM strictly using examples to provide, you with an opportunity to derive, you're own taste..."
And abe one thing u should think about. Whens the last time u sat down for 4 hours to write lyrics about how the world sucks. It gets EXTREMELY depressing after a while, so i needed a change.
I would rather hear someone rap about the issues (awareness) than ramble on about girls, money and thug-dom....the whole hip hop scene is weak and beyond watered down with retards that babble on continuously about the same load of nothing for 11 tracks per album. For some reason, people think they're talented..I think they're hacks. Give the money to the beat makers please.
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Rep Power: 319 ^dont worry mike im with you!
abe: i hope i didnt sound offended cuz im really not. I realise that the songs i have on there are pretty much all about me, solely because thats what has inspired me recently. I also love when people look beyond whats there, so thank you soo much...ur one of the people that has inspired me to keep going, cuz uve shown me the lyrics arent wasted. I will be doing many more songs with many more issues in the future so stay alert
abe: i hope i didnt sound offended cuz im really not. I realise that the songs i have on there are pretty much all about me, solely because thats what has inspired me recently. I also love when people look beyond whats there, so thank you soo much...ur one of the people that has inspired me to keep going, cuz uve shown me the lyrics arent wasted. I will be doing many more songs with many more issues in the future so stay alert
Originally Posted by player
"and now I'm out, and on the hunt to infect lives with creativity and earn respect"
Damn man, i love your lyrics, amazing, a couple of comments.
Is it just me or in track 2 - reflections, there is a buzz in the track, i thought it was just something shacking in my car from the bass, but i hear it also at home.
Another comment, dont take this the wrong way, its just my opinion.
Your lyrics are deep, very intellectual. But i think that you are putting too much imphasis in your lyrics on the facts that rap in general is garbege and that you wanna change the face of rap by good lyrics. you also talk about how you lyrics actually have meaning. but non of your songs actually talk about a topic that u think is important.
You say "i am thinking of problems with no feasiable solution. reducing problems is what we need" this is very good, but you dont have any songs that talk about how to reduce these problem, most of your lyrics are about how your lyrics will solve these problems and that they r deep and not about shacking asses. but i didnt hear anything about how to solve problems, example, say u write a song about how corporations are evil and stuff, and share your views on this topic in the song. then the song that follows should talk about how you actually rap about stuff that matters. that way the second song will have some material to reflect on.
you say " i cant express the intellectualnes above the rest," i am assuming you mean that u feel more intelectual over other rappers who rap about garbege, but till now you have only rapped about how "good" u are and how u have "good" lyrics, without rapping about something that really sinks in peoples mind.
Landin, please dont take this the wrong way, i am not hating, i have alot of respect for you, you have unlimited potiential, i am just giving my opion on how to improve your song. but then again who am i to say.
Damn man, i love your lyrics, amazing, a couple of comments.
Is it just me or in track 2 - reflections, there is a buzz in the track, i thought it was just something shacking in my car from the bass, but i hear it also at home.
Another comment, dont take this the wrong way, its just my opinion.
Your lyrics are deep, very intellectual. But i think that you are putting too much imphasis in your lyrics on the facts that rap in general is garbege and that you wanna change the face of rap by good lyrics. you also talk about how you lyrics actually have meaning. but non of your songs actually talk about a topic that u think is important.
You say "i am thinking of problems with no feasiable solution. reducing problems is what we need" this is very good, but you dont have any songs that talk about how to reduce these problem, most of your lyrics are about how your lyrics will solve these problems and that they r deep and not about shacking asses. but i didnt hear anything about how to solve problems, example, say u write a song about how corporations are evil and stuff, and share your views on this topic in the song. then the song that follows should talk about how you actually rap about stuff that matters. that way the second song will have some material to reflect on.
you say " i cant express the intellectualnes above the rest," i am assuming you mean that u feel more intelectual over other rappers who rap about garbege, but till now you have only rapped about how "good" u are and how u have "good" lyrics, without rapping about something that really sinks in peoples mind.
Landin, please dont take this the wrong way, i am not hating, i have alot of respect for you, you have unlimited potiential, i am just giving my opion on how to improve your song. but then again who am i to say.
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Rep Power: 319 okay so i got a serious question for everyone. Who has actually listened to the cd besides the night that I gave them out? Like who put it back in there cd player another day?
Landin i have a couple of questions
this line, is it correct, i mean am i hearing this right? in track 3
we gonna all die, we gameover, in preperation to loose
2- Who is the person with the second voice in all your songs ?
this line, is it correct, i mean am i hearing this right? in track 3
we gonna all die, we gameover, in preperation to loose
2- Who is the person with the second voice in all your songs ?
