Just detailed’06 Hybrid, anyone to proofread my listing?
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I cleaned up and listed my car on Ebay and since most of you know more about Civics then I do, let me know if I made any errors in the listing either factual or grammatical. It’s at:http://cgi.ebay.com/ebaymotors/ws/eB...m=150330660424 Any comments or suggestions are welcome.
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I stopped reading about three lines in to be quite honest. Nobody cares about how it works. Here is what most are concerned about when it comes to buying a used car. How many miles, maintenance reports, overall condition, and the price. If it's in good condition, well taken care of and reasonably priced someone will but it if they need it. Nobody is going to pay more or become more interested because you tell them how a hybrid engine works. I would also add exactly what kind of gas mileage you got as that's why most people choose paying more for a hybrid. Hope that helps.
Did you edit it...The description disappears when the picture pops up...
Did you edit it...The description disappears when the picture pops up...
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^yea, what he said is pretty much true. most people who buy a hybrid dont even know wheels are made out of rubber (you get my point)
all they know is hybrid = good gas. and thats good enough for them.
all they know is hybrid = good gas. and thats good enough for them.
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everything looks nice to me. lots of pics, text is a bit much but if someone is interested its good to have it there.
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most people who buy a hybrid dont even know wheels are made out of rubber
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